tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1333414709315437964.post2164774950364360707..comments2024-03-08T05:29:29.773-05:00Comments on Daily Picspiration: Jeff Tsuruoka Week 31: Lawyers, Guns, and Money - Part OneUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1333414709315437964.post-86107757373225100102013-05-06T16:43:13.856-04:002013-05-06T16:43:13.856-04:00Fantastic opening for a story. Really great writin...Fantastic opening for a story. Really great writing. I feel dirty just from having read it (in a good way). :)J. Whitworth Hazzardhttp://zombiemechanics.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1333414709315437964.post-89590637759805506622013-02-11T14:38:19.568-05:002013-02-11T14:38:19.568-05:00Awesome start, Jeff! I'm hooked already... alt...Awesome start, Jeff! I'm hooked already... although I knew I would be. Your writing is so exquisite--I just want to roll it around on my palate like a fine wine.<br /><br />SarahAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17068940312195977839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1333414709315437964.post-2373926411659041722013-02-09T16:41:19.043-05:002013-02-09T16:41:19.043-05:00Did he do *what*?? Oh man, killer opening!Did he do *what*?? Oh man, killer opening!Cara Michaelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00956521710750982258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1333414709315437964.post-49885169196082165912013-01-27T21:45:59.386-05:002013-01-27T21:45:59.386-05:00Oh now I wanna know if he did it too, but more imp...Oh now I wanna know if he did it too, but more importantly I wanna know what he's gonna do next! You always catch me right up in your story.Miss Blisshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08278662978242206276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1333414709315437964.post-55537401406445122072013-01-26T13:16:11.952-05:002013-01-26T13:16:11.952-05:00It's got that pulpy feel to it that was so enj...It's got that pulpy feel to it that was so enjoyable about Jake's story, but right away, I felt that this man had something very different about him, something that gave me a chill. I love how much time you took in setting this up, laying out the details carefully. It paid off in a big way. J.M. Blackmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1333414709315437964.post-71891993568165344572013-01-26T03:53:40.708-05:002013-01-26T03:53:40.708-05:00Ok what's he done? The picture you painted of ...Ok what's he done? The picture you painted of the bar is brilliant, could almost smell it - think I'm gonna enjoy this one :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00971686377049763453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1333414709315437964.post-83897708211908862772013-01-26T01:24:22.254-05:002013-01-26T01:24:22.254-05:00Man, I am with Antonio!! I want to know if you did...Man, I am with Antonio!! I want to know if you did it - and just what the hell 'it' is!! I love the easy flow of the narrative and all the little details!! Your stories always have a way of unwinding down the page and wrapping around my curiosity!! Can't wait to see where this goes!! ;)Bullishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05343416717330536392noreply@blogger.com