tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1333414709315437964.post2978975624406507244..comments2024-03-08T05:29:29.773-05:00Comments on Daily Picspiration: Kimberly Gould Week 137: Clearing the AirUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1333414709315437964.post-25339605941901821612015-02-06T09:02:51.123-05:002015-02-06T09:02:51.123-05:00I loved the feeling between the two characters, es...I loved the feeling between the two characters, especially the way that it was conveyed in their actions, not their thoughts. I loved the twist at the end and the sense of longing left hanging in the air. Thanks!Nickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13771855447802399708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1333414709315437964.post-42920148767964027982015-02-04T09:41:48.172-05:002015-02-04T09:41:48.172-05:00This is a good rough draft. Outside a couple of ty...This is a good rough draft. Outside a couple of typos, you have me still confused. I don't know when Jessie is driving or parked talking to her. But maybe you're conveying a dream Jessie is having or is stunned by ther accident and is dreaming afterward. Please let me know what you're trying to convey. I think you have a great idea here and it's vivd in detailAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11404100997386474731noreply@blogger.com