Monday, April 18, 2016

Laura James Week 196: Waiting

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Title: Waiting

13:00

He sat on the edge of the bed, hands resting on his knees staring straight ahead. Waiting had never been his strong point but he wouldn't give in, he could outlast them.

14:47

The silence was deafening, memories of the last few days fought for attention in his mind, his fingers started to twitch.

14:49

A dull ache at the base of his spin forced him to stand. He made his way to the window giving no indication to those he knew were watching that he was in any discomfort and opened the curtain. The sun was bright and he felt the heat on his face.

14:50

Closing his eyes he allowed the warmth to spread through his body and focused on the pain in his back. It was spreading and it took all his strength not to cry out. Raising his hands he gripped the window sill hoping that they wouldn't see past his body. His fingers cracked and he crushed the sill leaving indentations in the wood.

14:51

Dark clouds moved over the sky cutting off the heat the sun was providing.

14:52

Opening his eyes he saw the world outside shrouded in false darkness, his resolve wavered. Would it really be so bad if he gave in? He wasn't ashamed of what he was, what he had done.

14:53

He stepped back from the window, bring half the sill with him. He looked at the wood in his hands and with reluctance left it drop to the floor. This he couldn't hide.

14:55

Standing in the centre of the room he watched the door. They would come for him soon, he had left them no choice. But he was ready, the time to hide had passed. If they wanted his true self for better or worse they would get it. He relaxed and gave in to the change.

15:00

His senses were heightened in his true form and he sensed that they were behind the door long before the handle turned. Smiling he crouched, his nails gripped the carpet ready to pounce as the door opened "Come on in boys, I'm ready for you!"

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Based in Dunfermline, Scotland, Laura is obsessed with all things horror and spends her time writing flash fiction which she hopes, on occasion, really scares her readers. Feel free to stalk her on twitter, @lejamez

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3 comments:

  1. Fantastic tension and build up. Living the time element too, it really adds to his waiting and torment. The ending made me chuckle. X

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  2. Fantastic tension and build up. Living the time element too, it really adds to his waiting and torment. The ending made me chuckle. X

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  3. Oh, man! I am so intrigued!! I NEED to know more!!

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